Rebirth of Wang Baochuan: The Prime Minister’s Cherished Gem - Reviews

literally my only problem with this novel is how horrible the grammar is. And by that I mean that sometimes you can go like two or three paragraphs without seeing anything bad but other times you can read an entire paragraph and have to completely restructure it yourself in order to have it make sense. If you wanted those people that just likes reading on autopilot and doesn't really care what you read and you just want something to read then I'd say that where the grammar is right now to perfect go but if you don't then I would wait till the author fixes the earlier chapters and even later ones from what I've seen him some of the reviews and just clicking through them. The premise is pretty cool in my opinion but it's just hard to get past the first ten chapters if I have to constantly take myself out of the immersion of the story every like three sentences to fix an entire paragraphs worth of words because they're written in the wrong tense, the words are almost completely scrambled and sound like someone's blabbering in a language they don't know or just something similar. I'm sorry if this review seems really harsh but I feel like giving honest opinions is what can help some authors instead of just saying that the grammar is kind of bad because it would be an understatement of my opinion. If you end up fixing the grammar at all I will certainly come back and read this through but until then I don't think it's worth it because it's just too hard on the eyes almost it's hard on The Soul Man

A genuinely wonderful storyline with a great character design ?????????????????????????????????????I look forward to the new chapters ?

I give 1 star to stability of update because it's been 2 weeks and yet it is stuck to chapter 21. It is a great story though. I loved it so I want more

Mmm.Personally, I don't think this is a great novel.I don't like the personality of the protagonist, he's a liiiittle bit... how do I say this. He sounds like he's written by an author who isn't really socially adjusted. Reading the first few chapters, it definitely seems like the case. A cashier won't ignore you just because you're a country bumpkin or a nerd, they may just be having a bad day, or they aren't big on customer service. And I don't know a single person who thinks it's loser-ish to spend a day watching movies, as not everyone is a party-holic. What I'm trying to say is, the protagonist is way too thin-skinned, and has too much of an inferior complex. The characters thus don't feel too realistic. It tries to insert a comedic undertone, but the humor's just kind of flat. I just really don't know anyone who finds quirky comebacks that are inserted everywhere, funny. Also, the writing style is very *******. Too much "!!!" and ALL CAPS, among other things. Emphasis is done in all the wrong ways. If you want to emphasize a character's emotions, pour everything into descriptive adjectives.It's not completely bad, compared to some of the fanfictions on this site, along with some of the female protagonist romance novels, but you can't say it's good either, especially since there are actually some really good works on this site.Overall: 3.4 starsWriting Quality: 3 starsStability of Updates: 5 starsStory Development: 3 starsCharacter Design: 2 starsWorld Background: 4 stars

This novel is well write and i thank the author for ir . i will not spoil you it a heroic fantasy world about magic and the stuff but this time the story goes well with it up and down... i hope the author finish this because i really like it

I am new to this kind of story, and I love your writing style so much. I just love the way you describe the current situation, MC's personality is interesting! This is good! Keep up the good work, Author!

The question is how would I do that without even knowing what I am. I'll think on how to solve this later on. Argh! School is already near, I don't want to go with a bunch of nutcrack ticking time bomb crying brats.  Zero thought, he seems to have forgotten that he is a brat himself.

"Isn't this a little strange… ?" Shirou asked

They held a short ceremony and after that they had truly buried Dad's peaceful body.

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

So what's wrong with taking the back streets?

Me:ok I am the supreme alpha and you are just alphas got it