Can't you just update it on Lauren's betrayal chapter so that we can not surprise if Jordan gets cockolded again,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,
Interesting plot ruined by garbage grammar, MR. and Mrs in a time where that wasnt used at all. Separating conversations in different lines makes things difficult to read or enjoy.Then out of nowhere character just forgets his mannerisms and attitudes of five years and start acting like he was in the old life which is crap,Then out of nothing, just thin air, he finds out he has hipnotic powers activated by eye contact, which he never tried before or found by mistake. And suddenly the story turned into obey me at all times kind of garbage.I do not recommend story.Esta novela es una mierda. El autor sigue separando las conversaciones lo que hace leer esta basura mas dificil y me quita las ganas de continuar.El autor sigue utilizando MR y MRs como si eso fuera utilizado en los tiempos romanos.Y para culminar esta diarrea de novela, el autor decidio de la nada que el personaje tiene un poder de hipnosis cuando mira a la gente en sus ojos. Un poder que nunca sabia que tenia ni que habia practicado ni que por error habia activado.En resumen esto es una churrada de novela por un autor novato sin sentido de comun ni un poco de buscar informacion para ver como eran las cosas en esos tiempos. No leas.
Upon completing the first chapter, I found myself instantly connecting with the protagonist, which may admittedly influence my perspective. The main character reveals that she has been living her life for her mother, which piques my interest in her upcoming character development. I eagerly anticipate witnessing her journey towards making decisions that bring her genuine happiness and personal fulfillment. This engaging narrative promises an insightful exploration of self-discovery and growth.
One of the first novels ive ever read loved it until the author gave up and torpedoed it. Before you start reading, ask your self will you be satisfied never knowing the ending because at this point i doubt this guy will ever finish the novel!
Finally! Finally! They brought back one of my favorites. I thought it was no longer on Webnovel. But they just transferred it to this new page!Lumydee's!... keep posting, please!
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uh, this is a story that makes the brain work. a story about the dark underworld, the writing is really cool, the plot is also very curious. good job author! I'm waiting for the next part!
"Don't worry, it's me," Jun Yi said as Ai Yu pointed her knife towards his throat. "Liu... Jun Yi?" She asked as she lowered her knife. Before he could answer, they had safely landed on the life net. He turned her around towards him when they were stable. "Yes, it's me."
