Ojo said, "You are making mistake Femi" Femi answered, "Put me right then" "I did not go out of my way checking her aura, I did not even go home to check that other girl's aura, I went home to check something else and their case propped up"
Actually, there are a few grammatical errors and you keep switching from present tense and past tense. But nevertheless, this story has great potential. I waiting for more chapters.