Rebirth: I Became The First Warlord Of The World - Reviews

I will be reviewing 3 sections; quality of the text, characters, and the setting only, as those were the ones that did not receive full stars.The quality of the writing is well thought out and written well, and I didn't encounter any grammatical mistakes. It reads well and fluidly.The story so far a bit confusing, and I'm not exactly sure what it will lead up to, so maybe add foreshadowing here, and there in a few chapters -- would be nice.For the final section, the setting needs to be more detailed and explained. The character's emotions and actions are explained pretty well, but the environment and setting description could use more polish. We have a general idea where the characters could be, but it's not explicitly clear to what place a character could be at during some important event, like the battles or the walking down the river, what are the surroundings? It would be a nice touch to add the full surroundings of where the characters are to build the world better.Overall, it is a good read, I like the idea of the taming!

Just the synopsis alone got melove the plot of this book ???

"Hey-"

***A short walk and 4 bad puns later~~***

Tapi hanya itu. Setelah Anda memutuskan apa yang Anda inginkan, apa yang dipikirkan oleh seluruh dunia tidak menjadi masalah bagi Anda lagi. Dan saya hanya ingin anak saya, sehat dan bahagia dalam pelukan saya. Saya tahu, situasi saya tidak ideal. Itu salah dengan semua langkah sosial, pukulan besar bagi sistem perkawinan suci yang diciptakan oleh budaya kita. Tapi itu tidak berarti kita salah. Semua yang terjadi adalah kesalahan. Dan kesalahan bisa terjadi. Kita harus menerima kesalahan seperti itu dan terus maju. Dan kami melakukannya. Sama seperti kata-kata seseorang tidak bisa membuat Anda layak, dengan cara yang sama mereka tidak bisa menghilangkan nilai Anda. Setelah semua itu hanya kata-kata, mereka tidak bisa menyakiti Anda sampai Anda membiarkannya.

"Feliz cumpleaños, Hijo" con este saludo fui despertado.

That's really sad, I'm guessing that guy is a jerk and wanted to leave her because he wanted someone else. Those type of guys don't deserve the girls heart, think about it, if you gave out you're love to someone and in the end, they just throw it away like some useless trash. What would be you're reaction?. The same one the girl had,so she made the right choice by dumping that dude...

Stepping out of the car, Crysti looked around and inhaled deeply. "This place is incredible."

" How could that be only two percent of it, that's not possible. " said the Supreme Lord Kaioh with an expression of astonishment as he watched Vegetto's body go through all Kaioken's transformations, followed by the same stop at the Super Saiyan.

"Yes, very much. I hope you can bear with it. Enough of this chitchat. You don't need to make anything. I have already ordered breakfast. It should be here in a minute. After that, go and pack your stuff. "

"(-___-"") Baka gusto mong di ko gawin mo to ?!"

3 more minutes passed; Traey Rin's eyes lit up, shining with excitement, and the corners of his lips rose, forming a wide smile on his face. "Finally!" he couldn't help but shout out, and a series of notification messages flashed in front of him.