Came from tiktok as a big fan of this guy, read the novel and as a guy who's been writing novels here for almost an year now, I can definitely say this is better than 80% of what this platform has to offer, a very good job at it.Something I would say not as a criticism but as an advice from someone who's experienced on this platform, is the title. It isn't bad. It's actually quite good.Though WN favors clickbait titles like I'm the strongest and others so that's that.Besides that, great job fr