"What's 'That'!? You mean pointing!? That doesn't make sense, I thought this was a country of freedom! Also, 'Spring'? There's no damn water here, right!?"
"Hmm? Apologies, my lady, I didn't catch that." The red of his eyes glinted as they looked at her. His eyes quickly flashed silver, "Your brother, the younger one, doesn't seem to be looking so well."
For a moment , she thought she might rainy after all. Nemesis was the most feared assassin to ever live .Every known government wanted him dead including her own,and the price on his head was staggering.No one had ever borne a higher one. No one. Maybe its not him.
I fell asleep while copying my character description I wrote on a peice of paper for the next charectar chapter. The character I was going to post about was Alexander James Knight ( or Alex Knight ).
We walked for ten minutes before reaching the right elevator, went to deck floor twenty before walking for a while more and taking the elevator that went right to the command bridge, and that was the short way.
Writing quality 5 : well written Story Development 3 Character design 1: Mc is hyper dumb wimp... bro doesn't know who he is , what he wants , what he does ? World background 3: I am at 100 but I don't know enough about the world ? Good story but I feel like the author is not interested in doing this
