Rachel's Cabin (COMPLETED AND EDITING) - Reviews

Lily didn't look at her as she replied stoically. "No."

and after an hour we came out of the room

"GO! Surround the Oguls and prepare the tightly woven nets! Remember not to kill any of them!" Shouted Crigil and Burgo simultaneously from each side as they commanded their troops to start the fight.

*5 YEARS AGO*

Roman: "... I am going here."

"I rejected the plan for me to kill him," I said and look at him. "What the fuck you rejected it. You will be doing your first job as an assassin," he said in a serious tone. "But why must I kill a person I don't even know," I said. "You want to know him. I will tellyou who he was," he said and look into my eyes. "He a bad guy, love. He takes mymoney and kills my men. I want to take my money back." he said in a serious tone. Should I accept the job? My mind was fighting between an angel and a devil. I don't know what I gonna to pick.

"Just another day of work..." he proclaimed as he started his march toward GreenCore, the building rising hundreds of stories in the sky.

I replied cautiously, and looks at his companion.

= Outside the Green Gate =

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