This section is a masterclass in pacing and I'm still recovering.
The author starts with what seems like routine court politics — officials scheming, rumors spreading, the Emperor playing his part. Ling Xiao is sleeping in, hugging her System companion, living her best ghost-life. The pace is almost lazy, and that's the trap. You think this is the calm before the storm, but the storm has already arrived and you're just not seeing it yet.
Then we cut to the noble families in their elegant courtyard, plotting and preparing their countermeasures. The dialogue here is rapid-fire, almost frantic — they're impatient, desperate, and the author makes you feel that urgency through their clipped exchanges. 'Is this so-called Ghost-God real, or could it be a scam?' 'Eighty percent true is already quite good.' This is the story telling you: these people are about to make a huge mistake, and they know it on some level.
The banquet scene itself is where the pacing shifts into overdrive. Everyone is waiting. The nobles grow increasingly impatient. And then — she arrives. Skipping and hopping. The contrast between their tension and her casual entrance is delicious. The author lets the moment breathe, lets you feel the absurdity of a little girl in a goose-yellow dress walking into a room full of people who want to kill her.
And then the Xie Family head speaks. One sentence. And everything detonates.
The aging scene — the threads of light, the wrinkles, the cloudy eyes, the teeth spitting out — this is where the pacing becomes almost unbearable. Each detail lands like a hammer blow. The author doesn't rush it. They let you watch every second of those ten years being drained, let you sit in that horrifying silence where no one dares to breathe.
What's brilliant is how the author controls information. We know Ling Xiao is a Ghost-God. The System knows. Li Yue knows. But the nobles don't — not really. They think they're testing a fraud, and the reader watches with growing dread as they walk deeper into the trap. That dramatic irony is what makes the pacing work. You're not waiting to find out WHAT happens, you're waiting to see HOW badly it's going to go wrong for them.