Truly amazing! The world-building was rich, and the characters felt so real, I couldn’t help but root for them. I need the next chapter now! If you love immersive fantasy, this is a must-read!
I see potential in ur novel , the chapters are flawless , Less words , but better setting and writing , MC's personality is a bit interesting , I'll wait for daily updates , And hope you'll continue on the same path
ok so the reason i gave the writing quality a 4 star was because of the typographical errors,which I think the author should tend to,and the story development is great at least according to me especially when the story is yet to unfold,the reasons for rating the others this way is because I'm still expecting maybe as the story continues to develop i will rate it again.
