Its annoying, author doesn't use proper grammar, doesn't know how to use words correctly, and doesn't know how to add periods at the end of paragraphs.
Writing quality is in urgent need of an upgrade, if you dont get an editor or something to help with the quality I cant see this story being anything enjoyable to read.
it's kinda annoying how the author talks like hes in the past but all so the future and he restates the same thing like five times. The book isn't bad it also isn't great.
MC literally is a meathead who only cares about fighting and is so redundant to the point where he will repeat the same thing more than once in a single paragraph.
