Primordial Chaos God - Reviews

i love all your books,you are an amazing writer

" I wonder if they  will take me seriously and maybe they will tell me.....or maybe not." Legenn waved off his head as his low confidence started to emerged.

Sonja grabbed the laptop that was on her nightstand, wanting to get some important information memorized while the system was talking to itself. This info was sent about an hour and a half after that ma- erm, Mr. Iliescu hung up. This meant that in the middle of dinner, her phone vibrated, indicating that she got an email from him- in full view of her parents.

WHISKER MARKS make you gorgeus?? i think is the opposite

I love u..

He waited there for hours, or at least what felt like hours, before he heard a bellowing shout from the other side of camp.

den.          *

     Here i'm sat in the chair, being forced to wear the clothes that bound our freedom. In this quiet room I just stared at the monitoring glass front of me.

I like the plot and characters a lot but the author has the habit of over-explaining everything. A lot of the chapters are just random explaining of things that really have nothing to do with the plot in any way. There is also the constant pov changes for seemingly no reason. Instead of developing the mc we are focusing on two side characters before we even know what is going on plot-wise. It's extremely frustrating.

good start, have to wait for more chapters

I’m excited to read this new book, after all my author is the best just so everyone knows ❤️❤️❤️❤️