PLEASE READ:Dark Slit - Reviews

"Still, the Capital isn't much different than Cisus. Aside from the Royal Castle, this city doesn't have anything interesting to see"

We were walking barefoot into the deck, overlooking the sea.

The water's getting warm so you might as well swim

I watched as flashing lights appear out if nowhere. Then something popped up a witch? A fairy? I don't know what it was but I was telling me about how I was in a future portal. "A FUTURE PORTAL"! I trembled nervously. "Yes and i will show you the future" said the creature. But I didn't want to see the future. It was beautiful me and Noah. He finally liked me back and wanted me to be his girlfriend. But the creature said "This now won t happen because you tripped".  I tried to run away but I was stuck in mid air. Then I saw a vision of Noah and what he's doing. "SEND ME BACK SEND ME BACK SEND ME BACK" I screamed to the scary creature thing. "On 1 Condisson".

Everythings look promising in the first chapter, second one worse, totally acceptable, third? I think it is time to part our ways.Thw world building in the first chapters is not yet clear. Fine, he is a king, then how much power can he weild? Half figurehead like that of HRE emperors? Or that of centralised Sun King? Or even Dark age Feudal vassal? Now come to the character, MC is totally wrong me.  He was a King for a God's sake, and adopt random people as his kins? Overpaid his vassals?The mentioned IQ260 is a running joke here. I'm pretty sure that any student who studied science would have learn that saltpetre is a component of explosive in university if not high school? Successful engineer? Tch.And what kind of peasant's mentality is that? "you paid us 40% more wage and I will die for you?" if that works, all the motivational expert is useless then?And for the knights? They are too loyal for a person to be in that situation.

This story is very interesting and I love it. You all should try it out, the main male lead is very interesting and I look forward to how the story plays out

Where is the author I’m waiting for updates…

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