I was having fun with this, just mindless reading to pass time. The translation was okay, as was the writing. There are cute moments, but they are just that. The plot isn't really believable, like how she might "do great business" with a stationary store in front of an academy for aristocrats. I expect these kids to already have everything they need supply-wise, so why not just a candy store or something... But I think the world is really easy to overlook because as long as the relationships between the characters, their stories, and their actions are alright.
Characters... yeah, all antagonists are pretty awful and that's just that. But, at least they are hateable to some extent. The male leads, nothing really makes them stand out, but Dominic was cute. I don’t know much about Isaac because I haven’t read that far, but he seemed like he would be alright. To me, this series was fun to read because of the energy and dreams of the female lead (FL). I wanted to see what she would create and how she would succeed, even if it all wasn’t believable. But her optimistic spirit and Mary Sue-ness were going overboard, and I got bored. As I read on, the story felt like:
Hmm? She needs these people? Bam, here you go, FL, here’s the most talented bunch I could find. What? She needs these skills to make whatever? Bam, skills for you <3. What? An obstacle in your way??? *waves hand* What do you mean? There isn’t any... It all felt like this while the FL just remained happy all the way, while being mad from time to time...
It was fun, knowing and anticipating how the awful people who treated her like shit would eventually get fucked over, but nothing seemed like a major threat. There isn’t much variation in emotions that the FL feels throughout the story. Basically, there were no stakes. And, with the FL, being a transmigrator doesn’t really add much weight to the story. It’s the usual "I’m a transmigrator just for the sake of me knowing the plot and cool stuff these peasants don’t know." Though her dream and fondness for kids are related to it, there isn’t much else.
This is a cute, fun, and easy read, but it does get repetitive. It isn’t an emotional journey where the FL finds herself. But it is a journey for the FL to just achieve her dreams. And I think that is alright. It’s not entirely bad, but it could be better with a little more polishing.