The beginning had its issues- mostly writing. But as we move on it becomes much better, although a small tip I'll give author is that when writing dialogue try to flesh out exposition more to make it more interesting (use the pope in pool method haha).Author also needs to publish stably! It's very important, at least three chaps a week for the readers! Please be steady, author.Story development is going smoothly. No erraticness and character design is as interesting as it gets, without spoiling anything, each has there unique traits that draws you in.The world background is immersive, if you read game novels then you probably know better but I don't read them. Despite that, to me, the world background is striking enough to leave a memorable impact. So idk the standards since I don't read game novels but to me this is nice.In total, its an good novel, improvements will make it even better, its still in its early stage with lots of potential after all! Keep improving in writing quality author as well as uploading streak, stop taking so much time to upload~.
