Perdido en lo imposible - Reviews

A tall, powerful man walked slowly into the stage light. "Hey, Charlie, daddy's home." He said walking over to her and undoing the chains that kept her hung on the wall like a trophy. When she landed she looked around and found Michael sitting in the corner just sitting not moving other than for the rise and fall of his chest.

"Well officer, it seems like you have no more ammunition. Ciao!"

Hey now, you're an all-star, get your game on, go play

She was looking kind of dumb with her finger and her thumb

If you aren't interested in a High School DxD fan fiction then feel free to check out my Video Game series story I plan to make when I'm back at college. It will be called The Goddess' Domain.

this is stolen from kurokitsune on fanfiction.net

The starting is full of tension with the world in turmoil, hope the mc help deal with this in calm and brilliant manner.Even in just a few chapters, the protagonist’s gradual development is evident and engaging. It's early to comment on the world background and the overall character's design. but the story seems promising with a thrilling journey of growth and resilience. Hope it gets getter.

Like the other two reviews here, I too am giving this 5 stars because, a) I know it's going to be good, the author's already proven himself and it's a Warlock of the Magus World fanfic, and b) Because I hope to god he finishes this one, bro really left me edging with Records of the Dark Magus

Nice story, compelling characters and overall it's a good book