I love how you start out in the beginning of the book and how you build the environment it's not just a gradual build up you leave allot of imagination on the table for us to take hold of as we read your story I'm really looking forward to reading more of this. you have a great start going here and you even give each character personality witch is rare to see this much of it in this much diversity. i also love how you went with a historical mythology version of dwarfs that have an accent really allowing you to pull the reader into your world. from what I see your story here has great potential and could probably take one of the top spots with time. i can't wait to read more and i wish you the best.