Parkster Oneshots :D - Reviews

Hayato was in doubt, but he forgot about it soon and he kept seeing the map for a while until someone approached him

"Fine mum" not wanting to be distracted, her mum got the vibe and went to her room to have a shower then to the kitchen to prepare something, that was the same time the movie finished and then Danielle went to the kitchen to talk about her day. She kept on talking non-stop, before asking her mum about her day..

[Ootsutsuki Bloodline]

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Dear writer why is the glass lake taking time to update I miss it so dearly.pls hurry up and update it pls

Loki slowly stopped shaking as his breathing regained a regular rhythm. His hands left the table and dropped down towards his waist while he took a step closer to the desk.

Sementara Shirou menggunakan rantai untuk membawa sisa gadis-gadis ke struktur 'aman', Izayoi melihat ke arah pemandangan alien di depan matanya.Di bawah mereka adalah barisan pegunungan yang membentang jauh dan luas.Ke titik di mana bahkan matanya tidak bisa merasakannya.Dan di cakrawala ada kejatuhan curam yang mungkin juga mengakhiri dunia.Di depan mereka ada sebuah kota besar yang tidak dikenal dan tertutup.Sebuah dinding panjang yang tak terhingga memisahkan barisan pegunungan dari apa yang tampak seperti sejumlah besar bangunan seperti tenda.Awan berkerumun di sekitar pangkal gunung besar (itu adalah gunung terbesar yang pernah ada yang pernah dilihat oleh mereka) naik ribuan kilometer ke udara, seberkas cahaya yang cemerlang dan bersinar naik ke langit dari ujungnya dan menghilang ke luar angkasa.

"What is it Fritz?"

I am just excited as I have read the football part in this novel. Hahaha! I know you guys might be confused. Come on. Football club is a business too. I just want to say I am loving this. Please write a football novel after this!

gran historia lastima que tarda en actualizar los capitulos

The story is actually very good. It’s a humorous take on ‘cringey’ self-insert OCs you’d make up as kids with OP powers and skills. The main character’s horror at his own ‘cringey’ behavior and his constant internal dialogue really ties it together in a way that’s fun and kinda new. The world builing is really intricate and nice too.However THIS version of the novel unreadable. At first I noticed the lack of apostrophes and was like “no big deal, I can infer the proper words no issue” but then I realized that along with apostrophes there were absolutely no QUOTATION MARKS TO DENOTE DIALOGUE.There are so many lines you can’t distinguish from narration, inner dialogue, and spoken due to the casual tone of the novel making it basically impossible to read without giving yourself a headache.Really a shame, I had originally read over 200+ chapters of this story and was looking forward to finally reading the ending.