"on the other hand i never seen more filthier or disgusting a new shithole in the apartment. as the camera focusing on the man wearing a blue tuxedo with a Cowboy hat as Jay saw the man standing like a manager he was amazed and continue his story.
For a webnovel series that use 1st pov rather then 3rd pov for writing the entire story. You did a amazing job with it, good job. keep up the hard work