Outlawed Desires: Beyond the Chains - Reviews

You're bundled up now, wait till you get older

Well the years start coming and they don't stop coming

First of all , sending love to my readers  . Thank you for supporting me and reading my work. You are truly amazing ? Please help expand this work .

This story hits all the best points! I generally HATE romance plots but the twist on this one is absolutely brilliant so far and not forced in the least. The mc is op without being overly arrogant or stupid af (so far). The story sucks you in right from the first paragraph and never lets go. The writing is fluid and engaging, full of comic relief without getting dopey. Looking forward to more chapters. The world building was detailed and graphic without getting boring or repetitive. I’m in love so far ?. Keep up the great work!

nice don't give do some more improvement and u r fine.

Shameless 5 star review from author mwahahahaHad an Idea for a novel like this for a while. Wasn’t sure if I wanted to make it system at first but it seems fun. Hope everyone enjoys.Btw your going to see some star citizen ships lol I love the way they look.