ONE OF US IS BURNING (ONE OF US IS LYING FANFIC) - Reviews

Feels like I’m reading episodes of my life

This was nerve wracking and just wow!

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Hello guys! Author here. I just want to tell you something before you click that read button. You won't regret reading this book! Because it's something you've never seen or read before. This book unravels the mysteries of one of the most important things of all—the heart. And it shows how important this heart is as regards our eternity. Your face may lie, your tongue may do the same but what is that thing that can never lie? It is your heart, and that is what determines where we all end up. Up or down, heaven or hell?

So far this story has been to the same standard as previous Doever works; super well written!Currently the story is only beginning so there's not much to critique fairly, but this truly does create a more "plausible" and as far as I am aware, unique, take on the Evolution LITRPG genre so far.Will edit/make a new review once the story has progressed further  and their is more content to review!

Thank you great Webnovel Editors for taking our  opinion into consideration. Although it's really sad that some of the previous great novel drop, but I'm still mad at you about the Game Designer novel part.

I have so many things to point out.The start is pretty nice, and neat. However, for some reason, it just becomes... how should I say this, weird afterwards.The plot is quite... unique I guess? maybe you're trying to diverge from the usual face-slapping cultivation novels. But somehow, I really don't understand what the **** they're doing.I feel like the reasons on why they were there is forced, and kinda like an excuse to just play around.Also, I love Arkenvalle by the way. Please give her more screentime. In human form, please.

Kill the Sun!This is definitely a phrase that will remain in my mind for a long time.I can say that I'm eager to discover what the author has in store for us readers.  

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The man snorted his nose in annoyance but before he could reply, he is interrupted by Daredevil. Daredevil in a deep voice asked "Where is Elektra?".

"B-big brother you are so strong" a bright voice wake up Lin Xing on his own world. When he looked down what he saw was the little girl named Mengmeng looking at him with her big bright eyes. Her eyes were full of respect and gratitude as she stare at him.