Now Its My Time To Shine Dear Husband - Reviews

<< The next day at school break time >>

Great. Hoseok, of course, didn't want to wake up the boy so he looked around to find another seat and he noticed Yoongi sitting alone few seats away. 'Why is he here? He said he won't come.' He went to the empty seat and made himself comfortable in it.

"No, its because it was short notice, doing all of this is a process that normally takes between four to five days. We got it all done in half a day so of cause I'd we this exhausted."

"Hoh, how did that peasant killed a monster despite not being an evolver?." The boss asked while squinting his eye as the lackeys walk close to him.

I find it very odd that a kid that was living alone for years in the slums has not a single ounce of "Street Smarts". Plot armor and System reliance is way too heavy + I'm not a fan of naive Mcs that can't think by themselvesThe world building looks pretty good and it's made in a very unique setting but just the MC ruins it for me.  Maybe he gets some character development but I haven't seen other reviews mentioning it...I expect a thief to be smart and cunning but the MC is directly the opposite with heavy plot armor which doesn't make sense given the setting he was raised into

Nice read. I'm done reading the free chapters, hoping that I can unlock the chapters soon. Try this one if you love fantasy with an interesting female main character.

this book look interesting I am liking the introduction and the characters. looking forward to read more.

Very nice ? ??................................................................................................................................

Author here, this story is my first time doing one. It's slower than most stories due to my writing style. However, I think you will still enjoy it.