Non Caporeal Heaven and Earth Record - Reviews

The elderly orange troll chuckled, "A secret recipe! One that will warm everyone's heart." He scooped servings into Branch and Creek's plates while Poppy plopped herself into the third chair across the table, tilting her head.

"Grrr..."

-Strength: 6

And i see my friend, my friend that usually accompany me to go to school.

Great writer as always, has some proofreading to make, but nothing that takes away the reading experience. It got me hooked since it seems we got an ANCIENT friend here... From  an accessory of one... tô a prospect of king ... I hope the story develops as well as Fire Mage, since the plot there is absolutely fabulous!!! Please, dear author, stop being shameless and lazy and give me what I've been waiting for, for at least 2 years! Hope you keep doing the great work and stay healthy and productive ?

pretty good, apart from the pacing, the story is not bad