No small lives - Reviews

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Good job please read my book and add to collection let's support each other ??????

Romance? Harem? Yuri? NTR? Lemons? System? Hiding identity/power? It would be good to have tags in the synopsis to know what I am getting myself in.

I love the tension between them. Can't wait to see them confess.

Here I am after the 3 chapter rule and this is my review for now. My mood can swing and some of the fellow readers may not find my review helpful, so keep in mind that different opinions and thought could also be called individuality.The writer seems inexperienced and inconsistent. While I myself am a new reader, I am here to speak the negatives.Spoilers ahead...The story follows an average character whose name was revealed at chapter 2 (Park Sohyun) this was something that should be revealed in chap 1. He was streaming a game called 'Lost from Grace' till he found himself stuck in the game as it's tutorial boss Vanitas von Syche, a typical prideful noble. The protagonist has mentioned many times that the world of the game is soon to be crumble. I don't know why but I feel like despite him saying that he isn't serious at all.In the end I wanna say characters are a little unusual or unique you may say, but they are far better than few novels I've read in this site. The pacing is slow or sometimes too fast to digest so it is confusing but if luck is on my side and I could bear reading this, I hope it could atleast be a decent novel in the far future. May the author improve consistency and his pacing.

Not as an author, but as a reader, I am writing this review.What can I say? Interesting characters, a good world, logically thinking characters, mind games, and developed smuts later on. Simply, best among the best. Keep writing, and keep entertaining.  And here take note power stones, because you deserve it, Lol.