Pretty decent story if you don’t mojd Gary Stu narratives. 50 chapters in and it seems like the MC is playing a singleplayer game, having him completely seperated from grouping due to his own fear of betryal is bad enough, But limiting him from Starting/being a part of a Guild is Just as strange. I think that the ultimate drawback for this novel is the choice of not expanding on the state that the MC was in prior to traveling back in time. As a neutral reader I couldn’t care less about his struggles if I know nothing about it. Also making him the Son of an Angel and then having him avoid the church like the plague is really wierd. Intially it would seem that he doesnt need to have a guild because he essentially is a high ranking member of the church by birthright. I am already assuming that the church is going to clichely turn out evil. I did think it might twist the plot in a way that shows him succeed in the game extraordinarily, while having him still have to live through the crumbling of his family regardless of their wealth. But it doesn’t seem like that anyways :/
