No escape - Reviews

She let out a gasp as a tear began to drip down her face, before saying with a wavering voice,. "...her son died…and she gave me this so I can go home without breathing the air, but I think…I got infect-".

Damn women. What do you do for a living to get this much money?

After a few minutes, she could've sworn she heard someone walking down the stairs. Slow, deliberate steps. The stairs creaking, yelling out, angry for having to bear the weight. Skye's breath caught in her throat. She listened to this for three flights of stairs. From the attic.

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Of course im going to rate myself 5 stars, who wouldnt. This is my first story i will always appreciate advice, but id like if we could limit the hate.

Good Start, Like I said it can be improved.... not being to harsh as this is your first novel but, you already are writing two best fanfics rn... hopefully you will continue and will not drop it