Nazar. - Reviews

"Yeah, how could I forget that, you got lost in the woods but then one of the guards found you in a hollow tree while searching the whole forest by night till morning. I even had to punish your father for being so careless at that time. How could he have lost his own child. Even your grandfather had a fit of anger when he learned of it from me"

"Yes, but its only enough to stop bleeding, and I'm running out mana." He replied.

The larger creature roared totally losing his composer in battel. Fiercely knocking Broly aside in his rage he charged at me, but before he got too close my Ki blast that had combined earlier had become unstable. Catching me off guard, I had received a portion of the explosion and my body was blasted into the air and away from the battle.

Everyone else ignored the self-centered faux Frenchman, and began to chat excitedly amongst each other.

"Hmm, can I get a black coffee pls as for this guy I don't know just ask him."

"Woooaaah..."

"Son of a bitch." That was the last thing I said before everything went black.

"It's okay. I'll accompany you here"

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Definitely an intriguing story, the plot is interesting and the way it’s described is pretty simple and easy to understand and doesn’t rushed up. Will keep reading

The 'author is being lazy'... It's really good, but the 'author is being lazy' and not posting chapters. A few spelling mistakes (like3or4), but not enough to bother the readers or even notice them. The plot is really fire, but only 9 chapters so far because the 'author is being lazy'... can't help it since the 'author is being lazy'. The book is worth reading... but I regret reading it because of the lack of chapters. Now I am curious, but since the 'author is being lazy,' I don't get chapters... I hate cliffhangers... But I can't help it since the "author is being lazy."  | A good book, but the lack of chapters is killing it...

Shameless author here, giving myself a 5-star review! Writing this novel has been a journey, and I’ve poured a lot of heart and creativity into it. For new readers, be sure to check out the tags—they’ll give you a good idea of what’s to come, with plot twists, character growth, and an unfolding story.I’m aiming to keep up a steady update schedule to ensure there’s always something new to dive into. Got questions or feedback? Drop them in the comments—I’m always up for discussion.