All in all , it's a damn good read. There are punctuation errors throughout but nothing that makes it illegible. I like the twins they seem badass, and the struggles to greatness the the MC has. There is a bit of mystery so far that I can't wait to see come to fruition, but if I'm being honest I want a book about Abaddon lolol like so bad. Mans was out there being a Kratos and got locked up, and he's STILL powerful af. lolol ugh I like that guy.