Mysterious time traveller to age of Mahabharat [ Discontinued ] - Reviews

Thinking normally, if you can't get out you also can't get in.

"Richard? Is everything okay?" worryingly asked Mr. Goffs wife, Martha."

Also I will be updating and making this  whenever I can, and I'm working on it with a friend his job is to correct my spelling and grammar as I go so there is that.

"How about going shopping with me?"

00h50

The ice we skate is getting pretty thin

"Issei…save me..." Issei froze in recognition of the sweet voice he had heard as he slowly turned to see someone he thought was long gone from his mind… "Yuma..." Issei watched as she slowly changed into the more evil looking form of her true self Raynare.

Well, This needs more chapters to tell about the world building but so far i like the story.  It has some grammar that need to be corrected.