mysterious identity - Reviews

"What I'm talking about is taking down a major drug trafficking ring," Kallen cut him off. "You need to get your priorities straight, Ohgi. Me or Japan. Who do you care more for? Your country or your best friend's little sister? Cause there may well be a time when you have to make that call and if you hesitate you're liable to lose both."

It makes sense now.

She left through a different passage with a steadfast pace. A gleam could be seen through the only two holes for her eyes.

grants the ability to suck blood to allow

"Issei wanted to help you. But he couldn´t fully control the technique and didn´t know the side-effects. Murayama..." ... he adressed her by her name and then said the things she could hardly believe... "you will no longer age. Your body will be able to recover from most injuries and regenerate itself. And it is also likely that you will also develop other `abilities´."

Story is good as i read so far but I don't like the mc suffer more than his brothers, so I want in ongoing chapter that he at least pays back what his brothers did by broking their limbs one by one and also move the story fast, because story progress is very slow

Here is my review on Thread of Fates,Characters: For me the characters are the stronh point in this story. Ava is quite good female protagonist as she eager wanted to know the mystery and try her best to adapt woth her boyfriend, Noah's life. Noah is quite fleshed out character especially with the author spend the time to build up his revelation about his past. The author also paint Noah hesistation on confessing the truth quite well.Plot: I really like the plot is about the mystery about Noah past life that related to his criminal legacy. I enjoy the firsr few chaptera build up on the mystery. I also like the author alsp expand more the consequence of Ava learning the truth. Writing: Some of the description is quite fine. However, there are couple repetitive words and missing punctation marks that are easy to be fixed.Overall, if you guys like romance, I suggest to check this novel.