My Three wives are perfectly ordinary - Reviews

Xin: What!

  One day he when with his sister to pick up her friend. As Mia walk to the door he left in a gase. There was lights shine at the back of her , like an angel going from heaven she walks to the car . He ask his self ' is this love at first sight, no it can't be she's my sister best friend'

"Marryyyyyy I'm hungry" (Jane) yells at her as if her life would end.

"have you joined the party too, ey?" The voice called out with lurking despair and horror in its atmosphere.

"Now... I am going to cum, and you are going to swallow..." He whispered to her, his voice now thick with lust, breathless and intent. "Drink of me, little cocksucker." His cock thrust deep down her throat once more, and she desperately fought off the gag reflex as she felt his seed fill her mouth. It was hot, and the taste was bitter enough to make her want to pull back, but he did not pull out until her throat had closed around him, swallowing what she could, the rest pouring from the corners of her mouth.

I really like the story so far. It's very pleasant to read and also very easy to understand. I'm definitely looking forward and hope that this story will go on for a long time...it definitely has a lot of potential ??

I think the writer is actually good. Just need to relax as you are writing, cos of the errors. I like how the story is going who would have guess a record player could do that(that's why it is fictional).I will love to know who murdered that Jane.

Hi Everyone,Shameles Author here. Beware its a slow paced novel. Also its my first one so any constructive criticism is highly welcome

Ask me anything about this book, i will answer it. but no spoiler. comment as much as you like.