My System: An Evolved Computer I Made With My Unique Ability— - Reviews

I don't know why this novel is getting good reviews when I was just having fun with writing, but I'm glad that everyone's taking it well. Because of that! I'll be posting an extra chapter every time we reach a 100 power stones milestone! Also, send those summoning pens my way and I'll use them to the fullest ^-^ Thank you all so much for all your support and I hope you continue to want to read this novel while I continue to enjoy writing it. :)

Sincerely,
DaisukiDayoSenpai

It’s rlly funny while also still having some substance and making it an interesting read. I rlly like how the mc superpower is like bc it is op but also has its limits like how sometimes he doesn’t know wut it will hit or wut it will do

Really, right in front of my pancit canton?

This is a very interesting novel since it merged two of my favorite animes. I'm looking forward to how the story will progress. All the best, author!

Intersting MC power idea, but a SEVERE lack of creativity here. It only took me about half a chapter to figure out the "Japanese Cartoon" this series is based off. and the similarities do not end but instead increase. If you're going to base your world off a pre-existing fictional world you need to put your own unique twist to it, and I'm sorry to say that is completely absent here.

Has MHA vibes. Also a bit similar to 'Sky High'. Feels a bit over the top in its presentation but that fits what the author seems to be going for. The writing does feel a bit unpolished. I don't know if it's a narrative choice or developing skill. The story seems good, though I'm not a fan of how it's written. I like stories to be more livable than comedy. This feels more like a more realistic cartoon. Just not my kind of story.

Hmmmmmm~ Is it Me, or that last line is a reference?~ Ohhh~ I get it now~