It’s a good start and keeps the reader engaged. Kieran is unlikable and if it becomes too much revolving around the scheming love rival (Amelia) then it will become boring and cliche. At this point Kieran needs to start redeeming himself and the story will move more in the direction of trials they may face.
A shameless author on a relentless quest to conquer ten reviews, fueled by sheer determination and perhaps a bit of desperation. No room for hesitation, just powering through with unwavering focus and a touch of OwO energy. Let’s get this done!
