My Sunshine - Reviews

after wearing nice clothes Sora image changed greatly, from a poor boy to a rich and handsome,Looking at the handsome boy in the mirror, Sora was very satisfied, and then left while the beautiful boss still looks his back

Haha, had to quickly upgrade just to unlock privilege Definitely worth it.

First few chapters are rushed the author is just making the mc strong and crazily strong ? but after some time the story gets interesting and fun to read!!!!!

An interesting idea, and a strange plot so far. I think the paragraphs need short sentences and one can use the word (one) instead of he/she. Maybe you can add a bit of emotion to the characters in their time of crisis or when making hard choices. But so far, it's great on the science side, just try to put it in shorter sentences so the concept becomes clearer for your everyday readers. Go on!???