THİS NOVEL İS SO GOOD. hmm i dont like unemotional mc's but i like that mc because. he is emotional but cant show it.
1 i think mc needs a rival equal to him(rival should be same age as mc)(he can be like son of life or something like that ahadshahahahha)
2 İ think you should not give superabundant powers to mc You may find it difficult to control.
3 AND MOST İMPORTANT PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE describe characters.
i cant remember the character you introduced to me 100 chapters ago
4 and i think you act like we can see what you dreamed of when you writing. you should describe places to us
5 dont missunderstand me this is one of best novels i have ever read so i dont want it go bad. i just write what i want to see.
AND MOST İMPORTANT THİNG
İ LOVE YOU PLEASE PLEASE MOST CHAPTERS(SORRY FOR BAD ENGLAND)