My Private Planet - Reviews

So ako lang talaga ang nagising?samantalang yung ibang kasama ko dito ang himbing himbing ng tulog?ano to lokohan?hindi man lang nagising sa tahol ng aso?so ako lang ang may lakas ng pandinig?aaaarrrgggg!!!!why lord?!why?!!

Namjoon refuses to look down at himself, knowing that his dick has already perked up at Jungkook's needy call for him. What was the maknae imagining? Was he imagining getting fucked senseless? An innocent blow job? A heated shower session? There were so many possibilities...and Namjoon suddenly found that he was quite interested in the boy in the shower.

"What with that face?"

"These machines will make basic tests on the boys aptitudes and talent, finding them the best spirit soul avalaible"- saying so the attendant started to do something on the computers.

The reason Zynx was laughing like this was that although he was from snake race, he was created directly by the ancient god, so he had completely new bloodlines than other which meant he could obtain 100% experience point, no matter what he kill.

Tang Huai retracted her bow, put down her violin, and smiled at Gu Jiajia.

All that glitters is gold

Only shooting stars break the mold

Smiling slight, he said, "Lead the way."

Sensing something he turns, only to get three darts to the chest in rapid succession.

I really like the way you roleplay the story and how it updates, but i suggest you put more world background so the audience can actually "Feel" or imagine what's happening in the story 8/10 :D

I am enjoying reading this book. The story has been quite an emotional rollercoaster for me, and it has been a fascinating journey. The suspense and the consecutive plot twists have kept me on the edge of my seat, and I am thoroughly impressed with the pacing and characterization. Overall, everything about this book is absolutely amazing, and I am completely hooked.