The writing quality is great not many problems with grammar and the likes, but the storyline is a bit erratic and don’t have a good build up at the beginning. Imo the first 50 chapters are the foundation of a story, and should be where the reader decides to stay or drop the novel. I myself probably won’t finish the novel as I dislike any holes in the story, especially at the beginning and skipping time without at least a summary of what happened in the next couple chapters.
Not trying to say the author is bad or anything, for a novice it’s pretty good, but I’ve read many of these different world/kingdom building novels so this one failed to keep my interest.
Give it a read though, and support the author as they could be a hidden gem that just needs a polish, as we all need more good stories. Keep up the good work!
