My Mystery Pen Pal - 《COMPLETE》 - Reviews

Another pause.

" the mid one said "well no matter how strong you might be u still a

There, stood a man with a tan-colored skin and black hair. He has clear brown eyes and his aura is different from the mafia boss Reborn has ever trained before. He knew it from the start that this man is bad news. He is far different among the Vongola bosses before because this man is a troublemaker, he was sure of it right at their first actual meeting.

Spencer had felt a hint of familiarity seeing how the vine was twisted. The subconscious motion he had done with his hand was so natural that he didn't even notice. It felt like a motion he's done for a long time like something he's done hundreds or thousands of times such as tying his shoes.

Good to have some info of MC

The Nurseperson push me, and come nearly to the Doctor and said. "This is your new patient Doc."

can't wait for the next chapter that's author

The grammer and writing style is lovely. This novel is so expressive that the reader begins to actually imagine the ongoing scenes.I love the Grammer, development is a bit slow but writing makes up for it.

I don't know why this book has such low views and fans. Although I only recently started reading on Webnovel, I can tell this novel is great as a Murim and system story. It has a unique system and a ruthless MC. When I saw that this story had so few fans, I felt I should write a review for other readers.

tales of demons............,..............

The book itself has a lot of promise. I’ve enjoyed the chapters so far, and since the author basixally stated multiple times that it is something he/she is refining, I’ll be more mild with my early review. I really like the world building, seems very unique. I’m excited to see if there are other things/beings that can help one on the steps, which would be interesting. I reallly like the power system, it’s very unique, almost philosophical in a what. With good and bad, but not just action but intention as well( atleast that’s how i took it). Very intersting and it would be really cool to see the MC try and figure out the path without Noix (forgot the spelling) and actually have stronger understanding of the path, since that would make him more evil. Would be cool.I like the naming schemes too, kind of like the quinces in Bleach with the almost french (how I felt) or romantised language. Grammar and all of that definitely can be improved, but i’m judging on story and development that i’m seeing so far, not on writing style. I’ll keep it in my library and wait for more uploads, so let’s see how it goes.