it can be a bit clunky at times with weird story development and things that literally come out of nowhere but it is a pretty good story and worth reading.
My kind of humor and an interesting story. If you can handle minor grammar issues (there/their, your/you’re, lack of commas, ’a lot’ being one word instead of two…) then it is an amazing book worth reading.
if only there weren't so many mistakes with Grammer then maybe I could get myself to read more of this. sadly, Grammer is a major part for me and this story doesn't clear the bar.
Don't stop writing, you can do it. Don't stop expressing, or you'll dull the skill. Don't stop improving, writer fever makes us ill. Don't stop having fun, story must be told and seen.
