My Dark Fairytale - Reviews

Your brain gets smart but your head gets dumb

I said yep what a concept

So far I'm really liking the story. The MC is very good and beautiful. Please continue and don't stop. Currently I'm in chapter 14. ? ? ?

Minions! Tonight we steal the moon!!I'm going to keep the review spoiler-free. I am only here to promise you that my writing will only get better as I write more chapters.Fret not, for the quality shall not diminish; nay, it shall ascend to heights yet unseen, ever waxing greater with time. If my family and financial situation do not fail me, I shall write till I drop off from the face of earth :)Please be nice in the comments since this is my first novel and English isn't my first language. I'll take any constructive criticism; just be kind. (cries)Also, feel free to ask me any questions in the replies!

Wow, another gem on WN, a write which is different from those greasy cliche... and perfect rom-com... hehe I am gonna follow it, keep uploading more chaps I don't wanna to wait

A highly engaging novel with meticulously crafted character descriptions and emotions. The smooth pacing keeps the story captivating and never dull. However, it would be even better with more detailed descriptions of the characters' surroundings.

Add more soup to the story. The starting is well built but I want to know more about that Samson, and what he plans to do to those people in the estate. Overall, it's a good story for me.