Mutual Crush - Reviews

"Jinjayo?"

"You think this is some kind of movie? The hell do you mean zombies?"

"I hate this." Hawkfrost snarled, lashing his tail. Ivypool didn't know what to do, she wanted to flee but her paws are stuck on the ground, her paws seemed to be taking charge instead, dragging her to face Hawkfrost, who looked a bit shocked, but masked it easily. Ivypool gathered up her courage and whispered softly,

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Suddenly his tummy rumbked and he got an urge to puke. Sensing movements Dae opened her eyes and said,  "There, there,  open your shirt and I'll take you to the toilet" her voice was so calm."

So much to do, so much to see

Well, the years start coming and they don't stop coming

Peak! ✋??What a great novel, I love how the plot and characters develop. More chp pls

This book makes me want to rip my hair out, it was good at the start, but then there is a 12 year time skip. After the skip the story isn’t nearly as entertaining, and the chapters keep repeating and retconning things that just happened. One chapter will end with x character being knocked out in a room. To them have the next start with the same character outside prior to being knocked out except this time they don’t get knocked out. Or they will be going to the capitol for a ball “in a few days” to then not go to the capital right away, and when they get there they go “we have to leave because we don’t want to be near the royal family.” It’s stuff like that, that really kills my enthusiasm for this book. Though Mary is very entertaining.

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I loved it And thought the author did a great job thE story line was Amazing

I like the story flows and I like how wide your imagination is and I like how cute it is making you engage in it more. Keep sailing lovely author