Off to a great start! I love the premise and the details. There are a few run-on sentences; however, it’s nothing serious. This book is off to a promising start.
Has a really good writing and seems really professional and is really entertaining to read anywhere and has many interesting and fun to read details in the chapter
I was one of the beta readers for this novel and can confirm that Jallen knows what he's doing and has come up with another banger. If you like something a little unorthodox, read this book, it will not disappoint.