Seems interesting enough but it seriously needs an editor to help correct all the run-on sentences. The main character so far seems pretty dim witted as he wanders around like a tourist. Hopefully it will improve with time but who knows.
I like the story,the system isn't annoying and the MC isn't annoying so that's also nice. I like the idea behind the story as well,I don't see many sect building novels as well made as this one. Hope the author keeps up the good work!
Well written plot and well developed storyline....MC as well as side characters are developing at good pace.... Could have stock a good amount of chapters first and released them frequently for the first month.... Should focus more on MC... Already many side characters, should introduce less....A little suggestion, want to make the chapter big, make the MC able to see others stats like hi
So far so good, there are few questions that come up every now and then but the author improved ALOT since the first chapters and it is very noticeable. There are still some unknown factors like how good the author is in world building or character development, will they be one-dimensional characters or will they feel like real people. Guess only time will tell.
I will keep reading and watch the author's constant improvement over-time.
