Mortal Convict - Reviews

A/N Hello there, this my first fanfic so I am quite new to this writing stuff. English is not my native language so I will apologize first for the future mistakes that I might make...

Rias smiled at the enthusiasm of her knight. She looked over at Asia and Koneko who were both chatting although to her it seemed like Asia was doing most of the talking, Koneko on the other hand still looked slightly out of it.Judging from Koneko's behavior ever since before we left for the underworld, something has been eating away at her… the Koneko I know wouldn't charge straight into a fight without first thinking of a plan, especially against someone as powerful as Tanine…Rias's inner thoughts were cut short as she as well as Akeno and Xenovia heard the boys in their bath.

Okay, it's time to go to school.

It's a nice story with good background . You may tend to  keep reading when you start because of the thril to know another world .In short it's a nice pick to read.

A very enjoyable read that I am glad to have found! The characters have been interesting and the world feels fresh and new with its uniqueness. My only minor complaints so far is that there is a couple times where names are mixed up during dialogue (Only noticed it two or three times so far) Also that the first 12 chapters are linked together funny for the webnovel app so they always skip a chapter if you try to move to the next one. Forcing you to go into the contents page each time.Other than that, I am very much looking forward to more chapters to see where this story goes!