More Than an Immortal - Reviews

"System opened, file opened, section i found"

Matthew began to sweat cold as he saw the ground breaking from the brute strength of the fury zombie. The zombie itself was sinking to the ground and cracks was still spreading across the road. He began to imagine what if he had not dodged and decided to continue with the attack. He would be meat pulp at that time. And that did not sound impressive at all.

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"Dad, not now please."

I'll check out my new status later. I transform into the being known as Ether Elf. The female almost jumps when she see me transform. As she slowly inspects me, I as well inspect her.

Seizing the opportunity, the Imperial soldier lunges towards me. Caught off-guard, I tripped as I took a step back. I grab his arm and quickly punched him with my right fist.

You'll never shine if you don't glow

Hey now, you're a rock star, get the show on, get paid

My answer came when a log of wood struck the Gardner from the back of his head. He released me immediately and fell to the ground. Nicol didn't wait, she held my hand and we hurried back into the house.

Oh

I just started reading... and then, I found out I can't extract myself from the novel. I am more interested on how her journey will go. All those spaceships stuff is to my liking. So, we are moving. Take me onboard.

Writing quality is not that bad, however There are many instances Of Repeated paragraphs and pages 9-15 have what seems like entire pages copy pasted with little changes. the parts that are not copied arent bad. i only read to pay Wall and decided not to continue due to this.