Monster Girl Menagerie - Celestial Archive - Reviews

"Ouch!" Eirwyn dipped his fingers on the flames from tallow candle's wick inside the lantern attached on the pole. He felt the burn on his skin as he pulled his hand away.

By morning the two families woke up to find a sleeping baby and a collapsed maid on their doorstep. The two maids could not be salvaged anymore so they were buried and the two families decided to take the two babies.

"Yes." Orik paused slightly, before continuing to eat. He noticed his broth seemed to golden in color compared to his grandfather.

"I remember dying because of punching myself in extreme boredom then why I am still alive."

Lucas used the distraction to bat his ceramic coffee cup, slinging it the way a kid would skim a stone on a pond.  

The human had crumpled, and then suddenly stood as though the aura had no effect.  He did not seem to be putting off any kind of a dangerous aura, and did not appear to be the source of the dark magical reverberations.  

Only shooting stars

"Why were they put together?"

Read a few chapters and i think it was cool.The part where he started running around with kids with his willy dangling together with the annoying cat threw me off.At least i enjoyed the first chapters a lot,i might come back depending on how the mc develops.thanks for the good read.

IT WAS SO GOOD. Story was good, characters are good, everything is just good. I'm so proud of you <3.  Imma need some more chapters though.

when something is good let's agree it good. This story is awesome.

Hey author here. Am just starting my first book and I bet you it will be fun to read and eye catching. It would be nice if you tell me your thoughts about my book