How should I put it? In terms of writing, it’s quite excellent. The setting and themes are well thought out, and the character designs are also strong. While it might not bring every character to life, at least the Sword Pavilion Master, the Eldest Senior Sister, and the bearded guy are quite vividly portrayed. However, the logical flow of the plot is a bit harder to evaluate.In the early stages, the protagonist’s various experiences—like the protective charm saving his life or the thunder talisman blowing up the wolf demon—could have been better understood if he had just put a little more thought into it. Even if he didn’t fully grasp the situation, he could have at least had some clues, and with a bit more time, he might have figured it out. Even outsiders, upon first meeting the protagonist, could piece together the cause and effect of events within a short time. As someone who holds a cheat ability, he keeps thinking he’s some kind of “tumor superman.” But it seems his mind might be a bit off—if we categorize him as intellectually challenged, then his mindless behavior isn’t entirely incomprehensible. Additionally, the transition from the protagonist’s ignorance to understanding the truth of the events isn’t handled very well.
