Good story idea, nice plot. The story development is slow but that's not too big of an issue. It's a good story. The grammatical errors should be fixed tho. it's not much but it would greatly improve the quality of the novel.
very well written and characterized. It seems to be running a smooth plot as it seems so with the first few chapters that have been available for reading so far.
Straightforward no bullshitting it is what it is. The MC will be spending resources in so ridiculous ways it will make you laugh. Its a great answer to if you have everything in life what will you do with it. And the answer of MC is ENJOY.
I love it.... highly recommend And this one is an original work not like people who just steal others people's work and content the story is progeressingreally nicely and I'm looking forward to what'll happen in story in future BEST OF LUCK EVERYONE
