Medicine Martial Prodigy

Still at first half of the story.Xi Wei and Klaire's love story is completely overshadowed with Adrien, Carlo and Randy, Craig's love story. These two (side character) couples even has an interesting love story however, the desired effect of the readers admiring the two pairs of side couples' love became the complete opposite for me.I like the story of Xi Wei and Klaire–the two main characters but the two other couples–Carlo x Adrien and Craig x Randy is overshadowing the progression of the main characters. It's becoming more and more annoying to the point where I keep skipping over chapters completely full of Carlo x Adrien and Craig x Randy.Whose the MC? Who's the ML?Is it Carlo and Adrien?Is it Craig and Randy?ORIs it Xi Wei and Klaire?Yes. I don't like the love story of Carlo x Adrien and Craig x Randy. If the author wanted to write their story, they could have wrote on a separate book. This novel is like three intersected books with three pairs of main characters.

Man, how is this masterpiece in rank 500??? Honestly, I think it's very underrated since technically we're reading a story within another story, but if you give it a chance it's really good, it's now one of my favorites, it's all very well written and describes things well, plus it has a lot of emotions involved, I even got lost forgetting that I was the protagonist who was rewriting his own past and I was like the cultivators, a whirlwind of emotions. 10/10 Honestly, it's much better than the brain-burning 18+ novels that are full of plot holes and every 1 to 5 chapters they make babies. I am telling my experience until chapter 127.

edit: Little brothers, I recommend you stop reading at 127, I think this 2nd arc is kind of useless and I'm reluctant to read it so I'm going to let the novel end with good and happy memories without risking too much.

Hi, please I want to say something. I'm trying to make this book better so please check in on the 2nd of November, it would have been properly edited by then

Enjoying the plot and unfolding story line!  Can’t wait to read more!!