Hello!As I've reviewed FoL, I'm here to read and review this while waiting for volume 2 ? (Please update FoL). In any case, I feel like you're not used to writing romance? Romance here are usually fast-paced but I can see that you're prioritizing the story progress more or the fantasy element.Considering MYHYS, you also prioritized the story progress first than the relationships between characters. Understandably Cheska is the opposite of Amaranthe. She smiles a lot and is friendly but keeps a safe distance from others, while Amaranthe is initially closed off but more open, i feel like... Um, please give us a proper hint and scene regarding the ML too. There's two male main characters on the characters list and honestly its obvious who will be ML since there are more scenes or highlights with Kaye and Amaranthe together and you can feel their chemistry in a way. But Riverus has no presence yet (but I did love his appearance hoho). That is all, thank you!
