Masters of Faith Medieval - Reviews

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The only challenge the MC encounters early on is walking to the store to buy a gaming capsule. Instantly becomes a millionaire and the top leveled player on release while spending so much time offline.

Lots of spelling, lexical and grammatical mistakes.. Sometimes it is hard to understand the meaning of the sentence, often misspelled he/she/his/hers, kind/king etc. A lot of repeatability, repeating words, repeatedly, saying the same again and again, then repeat it. Definitely needs an editor. Story development is something subjectively, it is a bit slow for my liking, but it is a good story and it could raise into something great, while character development is pretty good, yet not too fast or too deep, you can feel the characters and there is a lot of space left for their development.  As for world background 45 chapters deep, I know almost nothing. It's some casual city [suggestion], guess it is something reader has to create while reading. As for stability of updates I have just started yesterday, seeing in early chapters in author notes saying (2 a day, then 10 a week, then 5 a week, 12,4,7,20,1... For god's sake couldn't it be juse when you have time even one a week would be enough if not announced 10 a week. Author (yes actually author) is writing 4-5 or maybe more idk. novels at the same time, not good enough quality even asking for donations under every single chapter. *I am quiting*. Please edit your plain texts, concentrate on one or two novels at a time, keep the good story and chapters, maybe add a single detail either on VR and real world and I will be more than happy to continue reading and donate.

I can handle normal poor english but this is almost at the level of an MTL.  The author clearly is uninterested in establishing his characters or his world as he skips over major events (discovering the MC time travels he is over it and knows exactly what to do instantly, the CEO of a company gives a random stranger an 11million dollar gaming machine for no discernable reason, and so on).  If the author learns to use an editor and slows down enough try to tell a story with even slightly realistic characters this might be great.  Not willing to waste more time than I already have to see if they ever do though.

DON'T GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! One hundred and forty characters later. DONT GIVE UP ON THIS BOOK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like the story.....keep writing

The story or novel is really dynamic, explosive and interesting. The novel progression and development is good as well. However, the characters background needs a little bit more to stability. There is a bit of a hiccup with the translation as well. I believe in time, you will improve immensely.
I love your story, it really takes you to a dreamland of imagination and whatever you can enjoy.